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If you don’t understand what im about; if you don’t understand who I am; if you don’t understand why I’m the way I am….


Wrap your mind around this.


If you don’t understand why I dance, you need to watch me dance again. Look closer. Look at my eyes. Can you see right through me? Like im made of glass? You see my heart, you see my veins? You hear that music? That’s me your hearing.  The rhythm my blood, and the beat my heart. Without this I can never be.  If you don’t understand run it back again.

If you don’t understand why I laugh, you need to listen to me again. Listen closer. Listen to my voice. can you see right through me? Like im made of sky? My lungs my brain, Filled with air and thoughts of joy.  Look at the sky, you’ll find me there. Look in the ocean, you’ll find me there. Look in the center of the earth, you’ll find me there too.  I laugh at myself, I laugh at everything around me. My imagination taking me everywhere, but nowhere. If you don’t understand run it back again.

If you don’t understand why im writing this...

Run it back again.
i got inspired for this one ^^
it speaks for itself; if you dont understand... leave me a comment about it ;)

i hope you like it and give me critique (but not too much :p)
lol thank you and leave me a comment! :)
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:icongambiitgiirl:
GambiitGiirl Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2011
I love this! I really like the way it's written, the meaning of this, it's really well done! Good job :]]
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Spartenas-dream Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2011
thanks a lot :)
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Beastlygrrl Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2011  Student General Artist
DERR I DONT GET IT


Haha, just kidding I loved it.
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Spartenas-dream Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2011
thanks :P :)
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HaevenWing Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011  Student Photographer
That...was awesome.
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:iconspartenas-dream:
Spartenas-dream Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2011
thank you so much ;)
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arriatta Featured By Owner May 17, 2010
thats bomb :D
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:iconspartenas-dream:
Spartenas-dream Featured By Owner May 19, 2010
Thanks :)
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xiaomikez Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2010
:D
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FerardForever21 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2009
I love it. and thats how i feel about some of my friends. Not my best friend Bri, but a lot of the others. Great Job!
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:iconspartenas-dream:
Spartenas-dream Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2009
Thank you so much :)
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wishIwasBeastGirl Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2008
that's so beautiful. :heart:
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:iconspartenas-dream:
Spartenas-dream Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2008
thank you so much ^^
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hockeyfreak28 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2008   Interface Designer
wow kool poem
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:iconspartenas-dream:
Spartenas-dream Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2008
thanx :)
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hockeyfreak28 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2008   Interface Designer
np
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RageAgainstHomofobiA Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow thats amazin!
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:iconspartenas-dream:
Spartenas-dream Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2008
thanx you so much ^^
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angel-of-revenge-xxx Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
omg this is brilliance..i love it you are a tru writer...keep up the good work!!
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Spartenas-dream Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
:bow: thanx so much
i try my very hardest :)
and i intend on writing more ^^
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angel-of-revenge-xxx Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2008
good:D
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wisteria2262 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
ah i like this bunches lol. very nice !
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Spartenas-dream Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
thank you ^^
comments make me happy ^^
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wisteria2262 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
i think you'd like my poetry... perhaps you could check it out...
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:iconspartenas-dream:
Spartenas-dream Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
no worries ^^ i will check it out :)
i have read one, and if it werent for me being so busy i probally would have read alot of your gallery lol
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DeiDei-kun Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008   Digital Artist
I can feel the awsomeness flow through my body.D:
Excellent work!
<3
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:iconspartenas-dream:
Spartenas-dream Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
lol thank you so much!
it makes me so happy when people say that ^^
btw cute avie ;)
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Tari-Shiro Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
How very poetic... I enjoyed reading it. All the more enjoyable to the people that share the same predicament in life. Those who cannot find themselves able to understand one another need only to look a tad bit closer. To not just hear, but to listen as well.

May all be well with you,
-Tari-chan XD
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Spartenas-dream Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
thank you so so much
comments like this really make my day! it makes me want to write more ^^
im glad you see my message and understand clearly. i try to relate to people around me and understand how other people feel. my turn to be understood :)

thanx again ^^ and may you be well also :)
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iamaspen Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
Good piece. Um...If I didn't interpret it wrong......is it about people not understanding your differences and not accepting you?
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Spartenas-dream Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
you didnt interpret wrong at all :)
it is indeed. how so many people just see.. my dancing for example :shrug:, and just think, "why does she do that?" "what is her problem?" "thats so stupid" without knowing me, or knowning why i accually do it.

thank you so much for your comment and the fav ^^
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DeadPoet4lyfe Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
i love this very creative
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Spartenas-dream Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
thank you very much ^^
i try :)
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NekoHikaru132 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008  Student General Artist
=O Wow~ that's so beautiful!
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Spartenas-dream Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
aww your too kind ^^
thanx so much :)
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corpse-chick Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
Insert awesome comment <here>
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Spartenas-dream Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
DX
lolz
:giggle: mhmm :p yes i see
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sk8ergurl1216 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
this soo reminds myself of my thought on people in school which im not glad to go back to :(
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:iconspartenas-dream:
Spartenas-dream Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
aw its ok, dont be sad.
there are alot of people who will never know others for who they are :shrug: just be yourself.
:) everything will be just fine
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semidemiangel93 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
A very good read. :]
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:iconspartenas-dream:
Spartenas-dream Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
thanx so mu :)
and thanx for the fav too!
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semidemiangel93 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
No problem! :)
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loveydovey101 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
this is so powerful & beautiful! i love it! total fave.
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Spartenas-dream Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
thank you so much!
its people like you that comment and fav that makes me want to write more! ^^

it really means alot to me! :)
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loveydovey101 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
well if it makes you feel better then KEEP WRITING!!! this piece was just AMAZING. :w00t:
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Spartenas-dream Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
yes yes i plan on writing more
thank you so much again ^^
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rougedreams Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
great job . ur free to be u , regardless if any1 understands . it speaks out using such small but powerful words :clap: bravo !
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:iconspartenas-dream:
Spartenas-dream Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
:bow: thank you so much
i wantt to write more too it, so you can keep your eye out if you interested :)
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Riverine Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
Chrisntheboat told me to check this out. Excellent! You are wise beyond your years Sam, that's one of the most profound things I've ever read... :clap:
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Spartenas-dream Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
:wow: well thank you so much
i look back on it accually and wish i would have added more. i think i will write more to it, there is about 3 paraghraps (i hope i spelled that right) i want to add...
(im rambling, sorry)

well thank you so so much. it makes me so happy chris is telling people about me :)

:clap: thanx for the comment!
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